I see some points I'd like to crit on a little though: -Her hip bone seems to be awfully strong, especially on the right side. I think her hip should be more tilted down on the right, maybe that would already fix it. -She doesnt really seem to hold onto the mask. I'd try to get some refs for that. -The "preparation for S3" topic is a little weak imo. I like the picture and all, but to me it's more the usual posing with an item.